Ms. Schrack Essay

In my 5th grade class we are currently working on writing essay's.  My students have been doing a pretty good job getting down the concept of having a thesis statement, an introduction paragraph, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.  Over the weekend one of my students, Miranda, wrote an essay about me.  I wanted to share...I will type what she wrote then attach a picture.  The pictures on here seem small so I wasn't sure if you would be able to read it or not.

The Best Teacher is Ms. Schrack

     Do you have the best teacher in the world?  Our class does.  You do not know how lucky we are.  Our teacher is Ms. Schrack.  She teaches us about writing, she has a son named Zeke, and she is amazing.

     First, she is very picky about writing.  For writing her saying is "when you think your done, you have only just begun."  Our class loves writing because she makes writing fun.  She makes us use pen in our writing notebooks so we do not erase it.  This is why I love writing.

     Next, she has a cute son named Zeke.  She calls him Zekey-Pants.  Just a little while ago he had surgery to see what the matter is.  Zeke loves cars and he is very sweet.  All these things make Zeke.

     Finally, Ms. Schrack is the most amazing teacher.  The reason she is amazing is she plays songs from youtube.  She teaches our class social studies, reading and comprehension, and most of all life lessons.  I know she is amazing because that is who she is on the inside.  All these things make an amazing Ms. Schrack.

     In conclusion Ms. Schrack is the best teacher in the world.  She makes us use a pen for writing.  She also has a cute son named Zeke.  She is amazing.  All these things mixed together make the BEST teacher in the world.

**By the way, the songs on youtube are all educational...figurative language** :)